Boot Camp Day 5
Apr. 7th, 2011 08:58 amDay 5: Male Mermaid, Envious, Coin purse and coins
(Just a note: These are posted with no alteration at all. I write them and save them and don't do any spell checking or editing on them. Once I get the three cards I have 24 hours to write the scene.)
Pursecatcher. The name rankled him, but now he was stuck with it.
It seemed so unfair. The fates obviously hated him. On their last raid the ship was full of women. So many of his fellow merfolk got their names that day once they overtook the ship and started it sinking. Didn't he dril the main hole that would spell the land dwellers' doom? But no one named him Hole of Wrath or anything wonderful like that. No.
As the ship went down he tried so hard to grab one of the women, but another, now known as Yelling Woman Grabber knocked him out of the way. As she was encircled by that obnoxious kelpling's arms her coin purse fell neatly into his right hand, and of course now he was stuck with the name for all time.
Derision was his lot in life. His clan's most lucrative raid yet, and he got a purse of coins and nothing else. According to the women trapped in a cave below the ship was taking brides to a settlement. Now, after the priest got finished changing their legs into tails, they would instead become the brides of their captors.
And all he had was a lousy purse full of gold coins. Worthless. The fates definitely hated him. He turned as Blondesnatcher said, "Hey, Pursecatcher, better luck next raid."
Yeah, the fates hated him.
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(Just a note: These are posted with no alteration at all. I write them and save them and don't do any spell checking or editing on them. Once I get the three cards I have 24 hours to write the scene.)
Pursecatcher. The name rankled him, but now he was stuck with it.
It seemed so unfair. The fates obviously hated him. On their last raid the ship was full of women. So many of his fellow merfolk got their names that day once they overtook the ship and started it sinking. Didn't he dril the main hole that would spell the land dwellers' doom? But no one named him Hole of Wrath or anything wonderful like that. No.
As the ship went down he tried so hard to grab one of the women, but another, now known as Yelling Woman Grabber knocked him out of the way. As she was encircled by that obnoxious kelpling's arms her coin purse fell neatly into his right hand, and of course now he was stuck with the name for all time.
Derision was his lot in life. His clan's most lucrative raid yet, and he got a purse of coins and nothing else. According to the women trapped in a cave below the ship was taking brides to a settlement. Now, after the priest got finished changing their legs into tails, they would instead become the brides of their captors.
And all he had was a lousy purse full of gold coins. Worthless. The fates definitely hated him. He turned as Blondesnatcher said, "Hey, Pursecatcher, better luck next raid."
Yeah, the fates hated him.
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